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Neural Foundry's avatar

The opening line about porosity is surprisingly heavy. That initial openness gets progressivly layered with needs and longings as we age, kinda like sedimentation. I've noticed with my own kids how they start permeable to everything, then gradually build filters and boundaries. The structure here mirrors that arc beautifully, going from simple being toward complex needing.

Edward Zaydelman's avatar

Beautifully said!

Zakarah Ahmath's avatar

This feels like a remembering. So gently and clearly expressed—our awe, our need to belong, and our desire to matter within the miracle of life. Thank you for sharing this beautiful articulation! ♾️